The ending was nicely put together, and a good plot twist, however a few shots felt unnecessary, and the non diegetic sound cut out at unnecessary times.
Some unneeded details e.g 5sec shot of girl putting makeup on. Only cuts and fade to black. Soundtrack was too repetitive and could've used some fading. Messages came across screen faster then could read.
The ending was nicely put together, and a good plot twist, however a few shots felt unnecessary, and the non diegetic sound cut out at unnecessary times.
ReplyDeleteSome unneeded details e.g 5sec shot of girl putting makeup on. Only cuts and fade to black. Soundtrack was too repetitive and could've used some fading. Messages came across screen faster then could read.
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